Saturday, November 21, 2009

a weekend bike haiku for you


slick rubber steep hill,


photo by geekstinkbreath

darkened valencia street.


three-speed fender bell.



written by sxl (98%) and calitexican (2%)

note: the main author of this haiku would like all of us to know s/he is working on improving their haikus from "american style" to its proper self contained 5/7/5 format. i, for one, am excited.

3 comments:

  1. It's been too long since I've written a bike haiku -- time to have at it again.

    Great seeing Adrienne and Meli today, and wonderful meeting Calitexican as well!

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  2. pedal, pedal fast
    the light will turn yellow soon
    Down goes the foot. Damn!

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  3. @ fritz: it was so nice meeting you & your family yesterday!

    @aj: HA!!!! & don't spoil the goods first ;)

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